Friend of Margie
It has such a strong touch and expressive colors, and created nice atmosphere for expression as background is so dramatic and yellow light behind her push her in front. good.
Margie
It is good taking time for painting and making expression by every time adding and changing too, this painting's important aspect is light, so you have to imagine the how the light hits face, which means form of face have to be clear image too, keep on working.
Tiziana
It has nice blue with brown color, it has wrong anatomy which ear is way down out of jaw, and has delicate angle of face not exactly side view, it's twisted so make face start with egg drawing.
Gemma
Now you put detail more carefully, and getting richer painting, so need hand to be more detail too, if it's rough touch some of image could be rough, but background of hand become more information then you need more information for hand too.
Sara
It is interesting shape and form which growing from center as blooming bud, and good form has weight and three diminutional effect to creates volume, but somehow, color doesn't fit with this form, maybe need more light and shade and color is rusted color which not your colors.
Olesya
It has interesting touch of brush that creates rhythm of movement and makes different texture by colors, blue makes texture of water, red makes as fire, but blue is more nicer because of has tone of color, red needs more tone of red which is shad or hi light.
Matt
It has interesting psychological expression as dream, strong object of red dragon flying in the night is good, also blue in sky is interesting light, could be much darker sea makes dragon and sky much strongly expressed.
Kenny
It's nice flower in front, pink warm color on flower and warm mountain color makes big distance and between has cool green, that called color perspective or depth created by color. pity sky could be much lighter to show land more strongly.