Gemma
It has nice strong color and good moment of expression of eye as Bali dancing, dark gray color is supporting other color well, nice graphical painting
Sara
It has all the tier of shapes, strong shape in from with texture is main shape and all the other shape is behind of this, tier of shape sometimes makes flat and need some form to be contrast.
Kenny
Nice front yard with tree also hitting nice light on stem, but water is little bit weak and modest, should be more light and different tone of color as sky.
Margie
Now eye is very good steering somewhere strongly, need more work on mouth and nose, you can maintain the parts of face with taking time.
