Tiziana
Mangku at beach, good expression at beach feel wind and ceremony of his, you need horizon of sea should be straight and around his feet should be lighter color so creates more depth and light, Mangku is good, just ocean could be little change.
Sara
It has expressional face but need more together as mouth and eye and cheek, also nose will be little wider so you get more expression on face all over, mouth has such a power and expression but need to be synchronize with eye and cheek.color and textures is interesting.
Sara
This one has more synchronize with eye and cheek with opened mouth, also lips are good with black also fits with other aspect of face, good.
Kenny
You captured nice light and colors, tree is located in center which is very strong composition, you got depth and peaceful landscape you made.
Kenny
It is interesting you paint roundness for farm which shows earthy and volume of ground. It is good touch for palm leaf at corner above, makes more space in painting, also edge of leaf has hitting light is good touch, yellow sky is well fit with other green that makes more lighting.
Jenny
Nice color and very simple composition and nice and strong brush stroke of red light, It is strong painting and nice mixed colors around orange sun, it's good painting.
