Sunday, September 16, 2012

Ubud Class / September 15th '12

Nina
Your dajanbe player has such a joyful expression which shows situation of how player feel about, also lighting is like stage light so has more feeling of live music, it has very good expression and lighting, good contrast and good knife painting method.



Sandrine
Your self-portrait coming really good and serious expression but strong and shows good feeling about, also contrast is strong and figure is pop out good, skin color and composition also good too, it will be interesting portrait painting.



Rumi
Your first oil painting is came out very interesting self-portrait, vivid color with shinny skin and big eye opened and looking through, it is strong and interesting painting also good expression. good.



Kenny
Your sea scape has depth but something missing as feeling of you, need something happening in this scene, just calm ocean and sky but need something to show own expression which is like dram or poetry  or own feeling into.




Maxine
You finish this painting as photograph, and good too, captured shadow and light, also expression of figure, it is good study to see how shadow and light is important but need little more your own translation of image instead of just copying photograph.



Atta
Your scene of Bali is good and shows living of balinese, this painting has such a perspective effect to creates depth, and big drian hanging in front makes big perspective depth, see how you finish this painting.