Tiziana
You finish this painting with beautiful color and light, it's shows so much light as bali and shows good expression of figure, and shadow is such a important thing to show light, if you make good shadow, you see good light. it has nice heart and atmosphere of worker in Bali, beautiful painting.
Tiziana
You also try another shadow and light painting with bali worker motif and mono tone color makes more strong contrast to see them, you also captured Balinese woman's expression and atmosphere well, strong shadow creates more sensitive tone of color to show up when it's next each other, it's your great series of Balinese workers painting, good.
Sara
Your gray color with violet and black color and light yellow are very nice combination of color to express strong conflict of thought, but gentle shape and form express as stage of your mind which is contrast of very strong and gentle mind, it has nice feeling about this painting as calm even strong, very interesting way you design organic form.
Sky
Your painting getting richer every time you touch which is creating more element of painting work, now you have strong depth in bottom and floating depth above, darker land and lighter sky makes good contrast too, so two different world we can see in this painting which is nature and human. good.
Hiromi
Your still life study is good as your observation of subject and also design of this painting is very interesting, has open space in middle and two direction of flower, one is blooming and other is not yet which shows time in space, it is nice lively painting and you are getting understanding what painting could express by observation eye, good.
Katharine
Your first painting is great and you captured good expression of I-Omo tribe people's face and touch of color is rough and strong but whole painting comes out very sensitive expression with power, you also express yourself good too, passion and serious expression, it is good to see first time painting because of pure expression, very good.
Priti
You have mastering your touch of painting knife, as brush, you have good color of control and creates color by touch of color, painting is not making picture, painting is work of paint, which so many way to paint, you are studying that how you paint creates what paint become painting. You also understanding how color makes light and shadow too, good.
Ann
Your expressive landscape is not complete yet but I see the possibility of this painting as spiritual expression of landscape, earth,water and sky, three elements of nature combine to creates nature expression which is good subject but you need to understand shadow and light creates depth of object and texture of each elements, it's like trinity.
Yuko
It has interesting ligh which is passionate light with holly subject, color is nice but did not show enough description of what's going on, so you need little more clearly what you wants to paint.
Jeniffer
Your portrait of american native is getting it, color is good and start showing his expression also little volume of person but need more work to finish this painting, maybe next week.
