Audrey
This time you finish this painting with different tone of color which is you need to find more possibility, your objects in painting has more expression than background and shows your message so you treat your abstract object as primary image and how much you can make them comes out with background.
it is interesting painting because of so personal and mysterious, colors are much better now.
Sara
It has good balance between cool color and warm color now, it is important that has balance of colors so dosen't stand out certain color stronger than others unless you wish that effect, but still need balance overall, sometime strong expression make painting unbalance but be carefully selected the touch.
nice warm color against green, and show light source which is right side of canvas, so primary point of view will be right side of canvas to read this painting.
Sky
Your painting become more mixed colors and darker colors which creates more richer and solid, now lingam stand out more than any object in painting as you wanted, good texture and has good weight so existence of lingam is much stronger, color is nice and rich too, it is interesting that positive space and negative space are liquid as one which creates optical effects too.
Atta
You finally finished " last rice farm in Sminyak" you made good perspective effect to maintain people and depth shows distance between two group of people, color has more light and your social message and sarcastic expression is there, it is like illustrated painting idea, and could be put in more your feeling about it.
