Sunday, October 23, 2011

Ubud Class / October 22nd '11

Hiromi
You finish portrait of Balinese girl good, you captured good expression of her face and such a good smile you did, young and innocent feeling also youth of girl, it is important how shading and lighting , nice soft colors and tone of color creates good atmosphere and gentleness which important for this subject, did good.



Audrey
You try this time for big canvas and did good, your painting has so many of your symbol of inside of you and shows good organic element to feel inside of body and life, color is getting more mixed color and shows good against pure color as blue sky, it is like sound of life.



Sara
it has nice composition by snakes, and used texture of previous painting which different feeling at the time but you use well as feeling of today, two different kind of liveness and contrast of action of snake, also color and light too, in the shade and light, it has movement but show some stillness and very quiet feeling too, because of color maybe. interesting concept and did good.



Sandrine
the color and light is so lively and strong expression of live and power, sun and flower but in the middle big wave of power stream and deep sky, it's a nice composition to show depth and distance of painting, and see through ball is good touch and shows this painting more fantasy and spiritual.



Sky
Nice blue against red and see through flesh tint, lingam  has good color for heavy and stone weight volume it has strong composition and simple but has impact and shows power of lingam, and blue color make clear negative space for good contrast. interesting painting and symbolic too.



Lola
Nice composition of abstract each block is separated but you see the continuity of shape, color is very nice and also has good texture contrast with flat color, nice design makes painting so natural and floating naturally which makes so comfortable to look at it. ou will finish next week.



Noe
Your primary expression is good but you have to go on more than that, primary and second and third to expand your imagination so you will search what you are doing, and what you wants, this is just one idea of two painting stick together to print each other with wet paint.



Noe
Sometimes, you have to observe yourself more what's going on with you, and you made today blue painting and red painting, could be fire and water, and blood and nerve, cool and hot, so many way to translate your two paintings so you will search more of yourself.