Gemma
It has beautiful texture of mask as copper or bronze, and you captured good with light hits metal and how light hits the face, nice color and well painted, good.
Tiziana
The color is good and background iix very interesting, good lose touch of brush stroke, but only the face has little harsh and shape of fece also need little more contrast of color which shows light and shade.
Tiziana
Good expression of face especially the mouth, and need little more elder aspect of face and neck. color is good see how you finish next.
Sara
I moved canvas this way because of the nicer movement also direction, movement left to right is more natural as physical aspect from where heart is left side, maybe color should be different inside of spiral or outside of spiral.
Sara
It has the element of calligraphy looks, but dark edge bothering the subject, if dark edge you should be stronger than edge or same as edge shape, background color is nice so pity that spiral become weak expression.
Christin
It has two different direction horizontal and vertical movement and looks like land and ocean with color of light, it is simple composition but color creates image and light, good.
Christin
It is painting of center conscious energy, empty but where energy goes, color wave from edge of canvas, it is more like conceptual abstract painting.
Kenny
You have good sky which has most movement and expression in this painting, deep and high field creates one of perspective, but could be much wider and bigger sky, dynamic sky and soft field.
