Sara
It has a nice bold image of abstraction, also strong texture as wet which creates heavy weight image and strong expression, also color contrast makes depth and I like the white shape as ivory texture, interesting.
Sara
It has good pose and angle of face of figure but might be too much line line to make figure more flat rather than volume of form, maybe you don't need line for left side of figure shape which black shadow shape support body line and colors.
Sara
It is interesting upper part of figure which has a lot of expression by color and touch of brush, could be rest of body can be same color and texture so separates clothing and skin as illustrated skin.
Tiziana
Backgroung got much better now, has classic background as Rembrandt, face and body need more shade and light contrast also could be more dramatic, left side of figure should be more darker to show body and face more three diminutional.
Gemma
Her face become more sorrow and better expression now, left side of collar of kimono should be darker which is light shade then become face and kimono will be one and light become more sure and from angle.
Kenny
Now you got good texture and richer landscape, beautiful sky expression with colors and clouds, also light color of far mountain works as far depth and where light comes from, good perspective for landscape.
