Tiziana
You finish this painting oth the beach which creates more depth and long distance for painting, also you captured light well as strong sun in the beach, and beautiful shadow on her. good.
Margie
You paint on previous painting canvas with colors and using those color makes painting rich and deeper color comes out, tone of color is nice and dark but shows good hi-light on face which shows light and nice painting.
Kenny
You put big leaf in front which makes good perspective and makes distance so long to horizon, color of ocean is nice and rich also beautiful sky with light cloud, you are getting better and better.
Serena
Finally you finish this painting with beautiful dress form and looks like object itself, you are eliminated face and figure which creates more abstract aspect, black and white and brown makes nice and chic painting.
Tiziana
Balinese lady working at shore, it has nice atmosphere in painting with early morning with small wave hitting rocks on shore, it shows good situation and sound and air you feel, good.