Sara
It become much better than before and has separation between triangle plate and background as floating in air. poetry is much clear now so you can read too, good.
Tiziana
Your landscape painting of fisherman shore is created atmosphere of quiet village and no person just as scene of resting, color is interesting and shore sand color is much nicer now.
Sara
It has such a weight of subject and strong texture makes heavier appearance and feel something unbalanced, unstable but that what express.
