Sunday, March 10, 2013

Ubud Class March 9th '13

Manuela
Your painting getting nicer, as boy has such a smooth skin texture and old man has ragged skin with his history that makes good contrast for two of them, old man has strong light and boy in shadow that also good contrast too, it has some kind of feeling both of them closing eye and very good.



Nina
Your experimentation of abstraction came out nice result as texture and simple line but you captured certain expression of her face with blue, simple line and texture but created depth and good form, color also nice and moody, good.



Hiromi
You captured good lighting also surface of water and ripple, good light and shade, color also perfect for Indian river water, but strong light hits water surface is great, it has also good three dimension effects too, good.



Monique
Your balinese dancer become very expressive and good face and eye shows really Bali dance elements, also creates light and shade well, you can enlarge the image for effects as Balinese dancing especially, good.



Yumi
You finish cat painting nicely, especially the background creates depth and separated with cat, dark and light also gradation makes light effect too, it's good painting for cat and your animal becoming more alive.



Kenny
You are start understanding of light and dark tree in front makes depth for shore and ocean too, you can creates depth by color deepness also light and dark. yo have good sense for perspective idea so more depth and light you continue.



Serena
This is very expressive painting with strong power of explosion of colors, it has great movement with line and texture, pastel color is soft but very strong this case with dark explosion, good effects.
It is more like inner power of you coming out and it's good.



Marcus
Your bat painting is interesting and flying good too, color is right and white textured background works as well, if you observe well then you find where to put right color on, and important thing for this painting is flying light as bat, but you did it.



Cherri
You play with color and mixing color, darker you mixed  become more deeper color but you put white touch to make form identity, it is interesting also you left small amount of light blue that makes this painting live.