Synthia
You have made nice one again, it is idea from African but end up someone who is more like your original person, but primitive girl become fashionable lady which your arrangement. there is good contrast to show the face and expression, good.
Margie
Sometimes it's good idea that let it happen your painting rather than try to bring back original idea, in the process, some unconscious touch came out but look at by conscious idea that wrong, so try to fix it but that's makes as maze of painting, so let it happen until end and still have chance to make nicer too.
