Tiziana
It is perfect for this subject with this canvas format which fits and focus figure well, color is good and so as three dimension effect with light and shade, there are good movement of her pose and show lively life of Bali. it is good painting with own inspiration.
Maxine
You finished with this painting with nice atmosphere and colors, about detail of photograph which you can eliminate for your own image or inspiration from photo, photograph is document and painting is memory from your deep inside of brain.
Hiromi
Your landscape painting has such a perspective and depth with deep canyon atmosphere, river and water fall makes good movement for painting and dynamic landscape you created, light color of mountain in far makes more depth and scale of size, good.
Mizue
Your nephew and niece painting captured expression of them well already, it is pleasant painting of by and girl who loves each other, you can finish next week for making much nicer and expressional.