Bori
You have nice color to show your expression which is soft and tender feeling, also your touch of brush is free and good, your image collage of deer, flower and water, that shows your imagination of own story also composition is good, interesting painting and continue.

Johty
Your painting of cat is happy looking also good free touch of painting, strong expression and show your love for animals, also you have different texture  in cat, background and field, which makes more richer for texture and painting, good.

Martine
You did not like flower on head so you eliminated which is good for your own idea, something you don't like, don't paint on, now looks much clear and shows background bigger and nicer, color of background is nice and such a lighting. and nice colors over all, you can start agin as new image.

Fiona
Your first painting is good as abstract element, and what you chosen subject is part of your imagination and make it on painting, composition you borrow from photo but you can paint as you like, it's not necessary to paint as photograph, so you can express yourself freedom and own.