Trish
You used oil pastel stick which shows different texture of line, and with brush paint makes more texture for painting, color is nice and captured good indoor color and outdoor light, you can paint well and color is getting very good as soft but has enough contrast of definition, good.

Lizzie
Your imaginary figure is good, better than looking at photograph, you captured very sensitive expression of face and body line, it has also good mood and with background match well as girl in the wind or girl in the wave, it is mysterious painting because of your own imagination, " Mystery " come from " My Story " so you got your story painting, it's good one. 

Manjula
Your series of " Love " painting getting more dynamic, not only the size, also it has classic element of Indian painting and modern element which is yours, color is nice and earthy, design of composition is also good, if you have series or painting or same subject, you need commitment for painting and you will study many things from same subject, you will finish next week for this painting.

Bori
You finished well, it has really nice lighting of outdoor and shows good shadow too, good balance of contrast of color which contrast of light and shadow, also you have abstract expression of pattern and line. It is pleasant painting and you did good work.